tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6995553671916309.post502257176803645684..comments2023-03-30T05:17:43.108-07:00Comments on Space Out! : NATURE ! Anirudh Vasdevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16899699769608875926noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6995553671916309.post-42361987196376325112013-09-11T05:35:22.740-07:002013-09-11T05:35:22.740-07:00Thanks for the suggestions Amit. I'll keep em ...Thanks for the suggestions Amit. I'll keep em in mind when putting pen to paper next :) <br /><br />Glad you liked it :) <br />Cheers Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6995553671916309.post-73704906871252396232013-08-29T06:07:49.131-07:002013-08-29T06:07:49.131-07:00Strong imagery is your strength. Work on it.
&qu...Strong imagery is your strength. Work on it.<br /> <br />"The poor man out on the street enjoys it first,<br />The V.I.P. remains oblivious in his luxury,<br />The stray dogs jump around playfully,<br />While the ones inside the house long to be set free."<br />Well worded. <br />Appreciate and applaud the insights.<br />However, you could edit to make it more effective.<br /><br />My two cents to you. pls don't mind. Just suggestions. <br /><br />keep it going;) <br /><br />Amit Charleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04724336704950643314noreply@blogger.com